hey this is the first draft of the first serious poem i have ever written. so youcan be nice and tell me what you really think. come on it was just for fun.
Will your promises be broken,
and will you fail my heart once again?
Every part that I have devoted to you
the fragments that have labeled over and over again.
Whose owners have been numerous
and yet none have ever satisfied the cravings.
And now I stand here,
in the midst of silence.
Will my heart be satisfied on this Earth?
Will the world which I was made for finally appear?
My yearnings have not been fulfilled,
and my heart is not at rest.
But as the owner of it,
I demand its immediate withdrawl from depression.
Before the encounter which shaped my humanity,
the pieces of my existence were carefully sectioned off.
Owners were many and fleeting,
until the dawn of that day.
By grabbing fullfillment everywhere,
I found it nowhere.
Until my crisis of encounter,
I wandered, lost and forlorn,
And devoted my heart to nothing but my own wants.
But He intended to meet my needs.
He reserved his secrets for those who
sought after him with their whole hearts.
At this, I readily surrendered my heart,
completely and utterly to His love.
Breaking the bonds and chains which had held me in captivity
for I found in him all I needed.
His throne is everlasting,
and now that he is rightfully placed, he will not be moved.
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Wow that would be a really good song, it is really good, and it is really how you really feel. That is how it seems. You will never be satisfied in this world as long you resist it. Yes heaven is coming but for now you are on this world, and you have to learn to let yourself be satisfied. You are looking and trying to hard, just rest in HIM and let yourself be satisfied. Look for it the small things, like those who care about you, those you love.
silently place youself in HIs arms allowing Him to work through you and be satisfied
hey sarah isnt annoying when ppl are anonymous and you dont know who wrote stuff?
well you can prolly guess who i am lol:):)
okok does the phrase "how did you know!?!" or *cough* *cough* *pull ear* *point* ring a'bell?
lol.
Your so deep, its amazing. Thats a really awesome poem.
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